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12/29/2011 03:08PM
petersz
Hey Joseph, Thanks for visiting and commenting. I miss you and are the poets who have inspired me so much since I first came to the forum in 2002. Too bad this site is so often inaccessible. I h
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12/23/2011 09:22PM
hpesoj
Desi... JoeT here....still around but not as frequently as in the past. Glad to see Jack still checks in now and then and that Perci persists as well. Les and Peter have been the real stalwarts h
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12/23/2011 09:22PM
hpesoj
Desi... JoeT here....still around but not as frequently as in the past. Glad to see Jack still checks in now and then and that Perci persists as well. Les and Peter have been the real stalwarts h
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12/10/2011 09:30PM
hpesoj
Actually, I prefer nutmeg in my oatmeal, but I do love your phrasing, especially "my cigarette mother..." (I had one too), and the "boat with nine drowning children." It's good to see you still ho
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12/05/2011 10:25PM
mg
Thanks for reading and commenting Peter
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11/14/2011 03:40PM
petersz
frosty, Nice piece. good to see you could get it out here, amo et avanti, Peter
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10/28/2011 09:26PM
petersz
May every globe trekker enjoy the beauty .... We had a most similar experience of the States from New Hampshire to Arizona...to California...to Michigan through Canada to New York when we got married
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10/28/2011 09:17PM
petersz
Les, Your poetic impositions assist my poetic revelries whenever my mind is open. amo et avanti, Peter
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10/24/2011 05:20AM
les712
Peter, I like the question you pose at the end of the piece, and the general flow of this piece. Nicely done. Les
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10/14/2011 04:43PM
petersz
Well, Les, The first five lines of the poem came directly from an email I received. They reminded me of the trend to refuse communication in various circumstances. That led to the progressive spe
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10/14/2011 10:20AM
les712
Peter, I'd be interested to hear your motivation for this piece. It reminds me of the 1960's song: "Everyone's Gone to the Moon". Les
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10/13/2011 07:33PM
les712
Peter you are at your best when you describe the poet's beat. Les "Down On The Corner out in the street. Willy and the poor boys are playin' bring a nickel tap your feet."
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10/11/2011 07:07PM
petersz
thanks, He was a complex guy. Peter
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10/11/2011 10:49AM
les712
A nice tribute, Peter. Les
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10/02/2011 04:19PM
petersz
Thanks, Les...I get twenty minutes and a pair of poets called, Lunation, gets the other forty. the theme is 'nature,' so I am going to read the twenty butterfly poems I wrote with Khalida a long time
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10/02/2011 01:38PM
les712
Peter, I hope you have a great turnout for your reading tomorrow. Les
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09/28/2011 03:22PM
petersz
That happens to me also so often. I sit down to write something and something else gets said. Keep at it. Peter
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09/28/2011 03:15PM
petersz
seen em' both. don't feel I need to choose between. thanks for stopping in. Again, I was most pleased with your recently posted poem. Peter
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09/28/2011 11:59AM
les712
Peter, surprisingly, this is not the poem I sat down to write. There's another little ditty which I've been mulling over for weeks sitting in the empty chasm of my cranium. But when I sat down and s
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09/28/2011 02:05AM
petersz
It is an awakening, isn't it, when the richness of the people around us shocks us into attending to our own limits, especially when we've lost sight of those limits. Very nice piece, Les. Peter
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09/28/2011 02:02AM
petersz
Les, I do find it strange that my voice recognition software turns whistling into words. Reminds me of that 'airie nothings' passage in Shakespeare. Peter
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09/27/2011 08:28PM
les712
A great poem for the season, Peter. Les
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09/27/2011 08:27PM
les712
"Pigeons all look alike to me." I've been told Peter that if you look around the table in a poker game, and you can't spot the fish, you're it. LOL Les
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09/27/2011 08:22PM
les712
Nicely done Peter. Les
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09/23/2011 10:03PM
les712
Peter, this poem is a tribute to your craftsmanship as a poet. I thoroughly enjoyed the poem and the trip. les
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09/23/2011 06:22PM
les712
A lot to think about here, Peter. Every departure from the comfort zone is a step forward, oui? Les
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09/17/2011 07:01PM
les712
Solsbury Hill --Peter Gabriel Climbing up on Solsbury Hill I could see the city light Wind was blowing, time stood still Eagle flew out of the night He was something to observe Came in close,
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09/14/2011 08:51PM
les712
Peter, I'm chuckling to myself...because people sometimes ask me, why don't you write some more. And I answer: "to level the playing field." Les
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08/31/2011 05:45PM
petersz
I ran into this in my notebooks, so I thought I might bump it, if anyone else wanted to take a look at it. amo et avanti, Peter
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08/30/2011 08:14PM
petersz
I think we could end up preaching to each other forever, Les. But it is always good to hear what you think of things. amo et avanti, Peter
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