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    <pubDate>Tue, 25 Aug 2009 07:05:53 +0200</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: Strange Notes</title>
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      <author>petersz</author>
      <description><![CDATA[Thanks, Gouwe,

Peter]]></description>
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      <title>Re: Strange Notes</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,231136,231199#msg-231199</link>
      <author>Gouwerijns</author>
      <description><![CDATA[wonderfull read peter
hugs Gouwe]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Mon, 24 Aug 2009 07:02:03 +0200</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: Strange Notes</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,231136,231138#msg-231138</link>
      <author>petersz</author>
      <description><![CDATA[That's cool.  That's always alright, to not know what to say about something.  Thanks for acknowledging it, though, Les. I like what your take is on this one, also.  Some days, I'm just struggling with my human thing, watching guitar music or not.

amo,

Peter]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 02 Aug 2009 20:44:44 +0200</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: Strange Notes</title>
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      <author>les712</author>
      <description><![CDATA[This is an interesting piece, Peter.  Nature/God  sometimes reminds us of our mortality and our inherent tendencies to not see the whole picture.

What  I take from this is that the world is infinite, we are finite and what lies between the notes defines the rest.

By the way I did read your other poem, but I don't really know what to say about it.

Les]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 02 Aug 2009 09:36:03 +0200</pubDate>
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      <title>Strange Notes</title>
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      <author>petersz</author>
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Strange Notes


cold egg breakfast
antiwar songs
classless...outrage
pathos down on the hill

strange pains
strange places
burning forearms

a day late
and a dollar short

...
Today I visited ...
after I sorted ... 
a bag of ...  
I forget where it is

I can’t remember the light --
Moon took me by surprise.
I hear the chord strike slow vision,
Beneath the hum of the day.
I will make it another day
Through the epiphany of the ordinary.

“... on the scene. 
What's good or bad doesn't matter to me; 
what does matter is feeling and not feeling.
... You've got to know much more 
than just the technicalities of notes; 
you've got to know 
what goes between the notes. “

Jimi Hendrix

Between the notes
The lights went on
Went off

That wind is
Blowing in my heart

I can’t hear the dark
Settling 
Anymore.

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      <pubDate>Sun, 02 Aug 2009 08:41:32 +0200</pubDate>
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