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    <description><![CDATA[Interested in feedback about a piece you've written?]]></description>
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    <pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2010 05:03:20 +0200</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,232548#msg-232548</link>
      <author>frost42_24</author>
      <description><![CDATA[agreed on the bump. I love this one more every time I read it.]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2010 05:03:20 +0200</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,232371#msg-232371</link>
      <author>petersz</author>
      <description><![CDATA[bump]]></description>
      <category>User Submitted Poetry</category>
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      <pubDate>Thu, 15 Apr 2010 21:59:00 +0200</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,231957#msg-231957</link>
      <author>lifeisbutadream</author>
      <description><![CDATA[I like the notion. Good closing question!]]></description>
      <category>User Submitted Poetry</category>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 06 Dec 2009 07:21:42 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,231937#msg-231937</link>
      <author>frost42_24</author>
      <description><![CDATA[bump]]></description>
      <category>User Submitted Poetry</category>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 02 Dec 2009 04:53:41 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,228557#msg-228557</link>
      <author>frost42_24</author>
      <description><![CDATA[Aaron,

you're welcome. I like your style.]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 01 Feb 2009 05:43:40 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,228546#msg-228546</link>
      <author>aaron</author>
      <description><![CDATA[frost, thanks for taking the time to read it over again.  Glad you like it

Aaron]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Sat, 31 Jan 2009 01:18:11 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,228516#msg-228516</link>
      <author>frost42_24</author>
      <description><![CDATA[just read this again. I love it even more the second time around.]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Fri, 30 Jan 2009 02:34:24 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,228338#msg-228338</link>
      <author>frost42_24</author>
      <description><![CDATA[personally I found it eloquent as it is and personally in most cases am against revising you initial thoghts. good stuff and no need to be humble here...you are good.  Peter is a good resource here thogh and gives good insight...read his work and you'll see why.]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 14 Jan 2009 04:48:23 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,228317#msg-228317</link>
      <author>Mr. P</author>
      <description><![CDATA[Not really my expertise, you better yell for Ian, he seems to be into that.]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Tue, 13 Jan 2009 21:12:27 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,228288#msg-228288</link>
      <author>Aaron</author>
      <description><![CDATA[Peter, thanks for the ideas.  It is good to be a writer among better writers.]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 11 Jan 2009 23:12:58 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>Re: An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,228273#msg-228273</link>
      <author>petersz</author>
      <description><![CDATA[Not moments in a sunrise
Like a flooding tide
Light and shadow glide
Through canyons and fields
A song too universal for melody
A Dance too intricate for steps

Only here, as the light eclipses
All that has been and will be
Am I free of time and present
In this everyday eternity 

or maybe

No moments in a sunrise
Like a flooding tide

Light and shadow glide
Through canyons and fields

A song too universal for melody
A Dance too intricate for steps


Only here, as the light eclipses
All that has been and will be

Am I free of time and present
In this everyday eternity 

There are just stuck me as an exceptionally weak opening phrase.

I like the poem a lot,

Peter]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 21:37:04 +0100</pubDate>
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      <title>An Everyday Eternity</title>
      <link>http://www.emule.com/2poetry/phorum/read.php?5,228271,228271#msg-228271</link>
      <author>Aaron</author>
      <description><![CDATA[There are not moments in a sunrise
Like a flooding tide 
Light and shadow glide
Through canyons and fields
   A song too universal for melody
   A Dance too intricate for steps

Only here, as the light eclipses
All that has been and will be
Am I free of time and present
In this everyday eternity




(I could use some help regarding the formatting/structure of this one.  Thanks)]]></description>
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      <pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 19:08:44 +0100</pubDate>
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