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IAMBIC PENTAMETER HELP!! PLEASE PROOF READ!!
Posted by: baller228 (98.18.64.---)
Date: November 04, 2009 08:08PM

Ok this is a poem I wrote...can you please point out the lines that are not in iambic pentameter and help me fix them!!

THANKS!! I VERY APPRECIATE IT!!

a Thee is nothing to me cause what happened
b I will never forget you in my heart
a Now we have lost love and we are saddened
b You have moved along, now our hearts apart
c I canít keep you out of my conscious mind
d But now I decided to move along
c On my search, I will overlook your kind
d Now I have found a girl that will love lifelong
e Both of us will live a life full of love
f We wont leave each other by any mean
e Now I can see the doves flying above
f She shall be the best and my supreme queen
g I have forever forgotten the past
g For today I am with her at long last




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