Homework Assistance
 Your teacher given you an impossible task? In search of divine inspiration to help you along? 

eMule -> The Poetry Archive -> Forums -> Homework Assistance


Goto Thread: PreviousNext
Goto: Forum ListMessage ListNew TopicSearchLog In
Aloof by Rossetti, Funeral Blues & Life Is Fine
Posted by: qy (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 22, 2006 10:16AM

hey everyone!
the 3 poems stated above are for my anthology. and i need help urgently. how do i analyze these poems? i really don't know what to start with. and i also need comments on the poems. i'm totally at a lost.thanks loads. i appreciate anyone's help.

qy.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 06/24/2006 03:15AM by lg.


Re: analyzing Aloof by Christina Rossetti, Funeral Blues by W.H. Auden and Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes.need help urgently!!!
Posted by: lg (Moderator)
Date: June 23, 2006 02:33AM

Aloof
--Christina Rossetti

THE irresponsive silence of the land,
The irresponsive sounding of the sea,
Speak both one message of one sense to me:--
Aloof, aloof, we stand aloof, so stand
Thou too aloof, bound with the flawless band
Of inner solitude; we bind not thee;
But who from thy self-chain shall set thee free?
What heart shall touch thy heart? What hand thy hand?
And I am sometimes proud and sometimes meek,
And sometimes I remember days of old
When fellowship seem'd not so far to seek,
And all the world and I seem'd much less cold,
And at the rainbow's foot lay surely gold,
And hope felt strong, and life itself not weak.


Re: analyzing Aloof by Christina Rossetti, Funeral Blues by W.H. Auden and Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes.need help urgently!!!
Posted by: lg (Moderator)
Date: June 23, 2006 02:43AM

[72.14.203.104] />
[www.cs.rice.edu] />

The Rossetti poem is pretty straight forward. Any specific questions about it?

Les


Re: analyzing Aloof by Christina Rossetti, Funeral Blues by W.H. Auden and Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes.need help urgently!!!
Posted by: qy (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 23, 2006 03:06AM

hey les. thanks alot for that web. i'm just not sure on how to give comments to the poem Aloof.i know that the poem itself mainly talks about being cold and remote but how should i elaborate?

qy.


Re: analyzing Aloof by Christina Rossetti, Funeral Blues by W.H. Auden and Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes.need help urgently!!!
Posted by: lg (Moderator)
Date: June 23, 2006 02:24PM

I would break the poem into segments like this:

THE irresponsive silence of the land,
The irresponsive sounding of the sea,
Speak both one message of one sense to me:--
Aloof, aloof, we stand aloof, so stand
Thou too aloof, bound with the flawless band
Of inner solitude; we bind not thee; This first part tells how
the author feels separated
from her friend.


But who from thy self-chain shall set thee free?
What heart shall touch thy heart? What hand thy hand?

This second part asks
how she can make her
friend feel what she
feels.


And I am sometimes proud and sometimes meek,
And sometimes I remember days of old
When fellowship seem'd not so far to seek,
And all the world and I seem'd much less cold,
And at the rainbow's foot lay surely gold,
And hope felt strong, and life itself not weak.

This part is reflecting
back on times when the
two were close.


Les

Edited 2 time(s). Last edit at 06/27/2006 12:04PM by lg.


Re: analyzing Aloof by Christina Rossetti, Funeral Blues by W.H. Auden and Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes.need help urgently!!!
Posted by: Hugh Clary (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 23, 2006 03:18PM

Is this one part of a trilogy of sonnets?

[www.victorianweb.org] />
The last lines of the 3rd sonnet recall 1 Corinthians 15:55.


Re: analyzing Aloof by Christina Rossetti, Funeral Blues by W.H. Auden and Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes.need help urgently!!!
Posted by: lg (Moderator)
Date: June 23, 2006 05:18PM

Hugh, I searched the Victorian Web, website and found nothing that referred directly to this particular poem. In answer to your question, no I don't think it is part of a series.

Les


Re: analyzing Aloof by Christina Rossetti, Funeral Blues by W.H. Auden and Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes.need help urgently!!!
Posted by: qy (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 23, 2006 11:37PM

hey!

thanks alot for helping me.smiling smiley

qy.


Re: analyzing Aloof by Christina Rossetti, Funeral Blues by W.H. Auden and Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes.need help urgently!!!
Posted by: Hugh Clary (192.168.128.---)
Date: June 27, 2006 11:41AM

Looks like eMule has it as a triad also:

[www.emule.com] />
It wouldn't matter much, except for the interpretation needed by young qy. That is, the volta at the end of the third sonnet seems to indicate they are all written to (her) God, the conclusion for the group of three (Trinity?) being:

And this myself as king unto my King
I give, to Him Who gave Himself for me;
Who gives Himself to me, and bids me sing
A sweet new song of His redeemed set free;
he bids me sing: O death, where is thy sting?
And sing: O grave, where is thy victory?




Sorry, only registered users may post in this forum.
This poetry forum at emule.com powered by Phorum.