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'The Fallen Birdman' plz update poem urgent!!
Posted by: jasonrulz11 (---.akl.callplus.net.nz)
Date: March 31, 2005 09:19AM

looking for this poem
poet is probably Roger McGough
I cant find it on the net..
urgent
it might be in a book called 'touched with fire'


Re: 'The Fallen Birdman' plz update poem urgent!!
Posted by: Hugh Clary (---.denver-03rh16rt-04rh15rt.co.dial-access.att.ne)
Date: March 31, 2005 01:04PM

It is by McGough, but still under copyright, so no copies to be found on the internet.

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Re: 'The Fallen Birdman' plz update poem urgent!!
Posted by: taterfritter (192.168.128.---)
Date: September 20, 2005 11:09PM

The oldman in the cripplechair
Died in transit through the air
And slopped into the road.

The driver of the lethallory
Trembled out and cried: 'I'm sorry,
But it was his own fault'.

Humans snuggled round the mess
In masochistic tenderness
As raindrops danced in his womb

* * *

but something else obsessed my brian,
The canvas, twistedsteel and cane,
His chair, spreadeagled in the rain,
Like a fallen birdman.

Roger McGough


Re: 'The Fallen Birdman' plz update poem urgent!!
Posted by: IanB (192.168.128.---)
Date: September 21, 2005 02:10AM

Hmmm.   Well may he write '* * *'.

I suppose, but can't be sure with something that looks so authorabandoned, that 'lethallory' is someone's mistranscription of 'lethal lorry'.

But 'his womb' ??!

Was RMcG trying to write a piece of sciencefiction futurespeak?


Re: 'The Fallen Birdman' plz update poem urgent!!
Posted by: J3zz (192.168.128.---)
Date: September 21, 2005 05:56AM


Re: 'The Fallen Birdman' plz update poem urgent!!
Posted by: Hugh Clary (192.168.128.---)
Date: September 21, 2005 11:38AM

You are saying is is an example of ekphrasis? A poem about another work of art, such as a painting or sculpture? If so, I would be interested in knowing the referenced work.

The 'raindrops danced in his womb' seems suspect to me as well, because of change in meter. I feel sure brian is a typo for brain, but the form chosen is also strange. Rings a bell, but I can't place it, I mean. Three three-line stanzas each rhyming aax and the separated fourth one with four lines rhyming aaa(a?).

Certainly doesn't sound like Roger's usual light verse stuff.




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