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A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: May 08, 2004 06:08AM

Impaired Logic

‘Compensation’ for human dignity
Seems a farfetched, pompous atrocity!
For the “cow” can “jump over the moon”, yes.
The “dish” can “run away with the spoon”, sure.
But humiliation can’t be erased,
By taking up ‘responsibilities’,
Hence a human history be defaced.

“All the king’s horses and all the king’s men
Couldn’t put Humpty together again.”
Try as we may, sunlight can’t be silenced,
Whatever part of the globe it faces!


8-5-2004


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: lg (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: May 08, 2004 01:18PM

A sad commentary on world affairs. Very well done K. Q.

Les


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: Cad (---.strl1201.mi.comcast.net)
Date: May 08, 2004 01:46PM

K.Q.
It is very bitter. It's awesome. I like it.

Cad


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: May 10, 2004 05:02AM

Thanks cad and Les. I am speechless!


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: lg (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: May 10, 2004 05:38AM



Your presence is sure like the wind:

You're welcome!            smiling smiley


Les


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: May 10, 2004 05:46AM

It is , and vital!!
smiling smiley


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: illudiumphosdex (209.101.250.---)
Date: May 11, 2004 11:53AM

K.Q., I'll chime in on this one. Loved it, especially for its flow, it doesn't sound forced at all. Great job!

- Bob


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: Breathing Oxide (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 11, 2004 04:00PM

A good flow of words, I'll be reading your next one.


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................................................ Breathe The Silent Breath Of Hate Swallowed Unto Evils Gates.......... Know That I Reek Of You............. Your Killing Me........................... ..............................................


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: May 13, 2004 06:50AM

Thanks a lot , BOb and Oxide!!I apppreciate it!


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: Gwydion (209.53.139.---)
Date: May 13, 2004 11:38AM


Fantastic, KQ! Extremely expressive and impressive!


It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it. (Aristotle)


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: May 14, 2004 05:13AM

Thanks Gwyn. I am flattered!


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: meriti (---.atl3.corp.earthlink.net)
Date: May 14, 2004 11:14PM

I really like this piece. Bitter and forceful without being didactic... impressive indeed.

meriti

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Sobriety is overrated.


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: opiateourfather (---.ispnetbilling.com)
Date: May 14, 2004 11:54PM

Nice. Stings and leaves a welt. Certainly echoes some of my own thoughts.


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: May 15, 2004 07:25AM

Thanks meriti and opiateourfather . It's good to know that others do share some of ones' thoughts/emotions!


Re: A Bitter Facial Expression
Posted by: raven eyes (---.tyrd.cox-internet.com)
Date: May 15, 2004 01:37PM

Definately bitter in that its true. Rings hard and true. Rock on.

Signature: This world ceaselessly kicks me in the nuts, and after so much, i almost like it.




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