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Believe (Revised)
Posted by: BreathingOxide (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 01, 2004 11:25PM

I believe, what I believe,
Not what all my demons say
What I fear is what I hear,
In the most demonic way.

Dreams I have, make them stop,
Hoping that they won't be real
My reward, is coming toward,
All the life I've left to feel.

Buried by my misery,
Haunted from nonentity
That memory, is never me,
Screaming for identity.

Lost in my forgotten place,
Hopes and dreams inside my mind
I'm to blame, it's my game,
Maybe I'll forget in time.



Post Edited (05-01-04 22:27)

-Oxide Slain


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: May 03, 2004 09:30AM

Maybe I'll forget in time.

I like the irony: intending to forget!!!
nice poem!


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: Breathing Oxide (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 04, 2004 03:53PM

Thank you

................................................ Breathe The Silent Breath Of Hate Swallowed Unto Evils Gates.......... Know That I Reek Of You............. Your Killing Me........................... ..............................................


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: lg (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: May 04, 2004 03:56PM

This is a good one, Oxide. I enjoyed the read.

Les


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: BreathingOxide (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 07, 2004 12:45AM

Thank you

-Oxide Slain


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: twotenranch (---.ras11.calan-e.alerondial.net)
Date: May 08, 2004 12:27AM

Boy howdy, you are on my read first list from now on with Brucie and JP and a few others...
Like this stuff.

Terry


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: BreathingOxide (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 08, 2004 02:29PM

Thank you, twoten.

-Oxide Slain


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: Lynnie (---.sd.sd.cox.net)
Date: May 09, 2004 05:06PM

Nice. I liked the feeling.


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: Breathing Oxide (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 10, 2004 04:15PM

Thank you

................................................ Breathe The Silent Breath Of Hate Swallowed Unto Evils Gates.......... Know That I Reek Of You............. Your Killing Me........................... ..............................................


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: May 11, 2004 08:42AM

Thank you , thank you , thank you! There is a joke that goes with that!
just kidding!smiling smiley


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: Breathing Oxide (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 11, 2004 03:49PM

Nothing more need's to be said.
Only a poets appreciation.
(Thank you)

................................................ Breathe The Silent Breath Of Hate Swallowed Unto Evils Gates.......... Know That I Reek Of You............. Your Killing Me........................... ..............................................


Re: Believe (Revised)
Posted by: petersz (67.188.236.---)
Date: January 16, 2012 02:00PM

breath




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