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April
Posted by: M.P. (---.dialup.sunysb.edu)
Date: April 11, 2004 02:14AM

Hi! I haven't been to emule for a while, but I've been really busy in school. I forgot the last time I wrote a poem =(


April 4/11/2004


My thumb and middle finger froze
in January's freezer,
trying to grab
an ice cream bar. Cold, metal-bar-
on-your-belly-in-your-
warm-bed
cold.

April is like
a school of thirty tropical
yellow-red-orange fish
swimming in my heart(a fish
tank) that is
wide and long,
because it is April.

June has a bronzed body and
an inflated ego,
so do July and August.
September and its older friends
have an upturned nose and
wear fancy fur coats.

April is a terrible painter,
but gets lucky sometimes
when mixing
the gold and the white and the blue

sky that rarely
sings
about April,
but it is April.
Yes, it is
April!

--M.P.


Re: April
Posted by: K.Q. (217.144.4.---)
Date: April 11, 2004 02:17AM

I love the visual picture you draw out of words ! Beautiful poem. April is my favourite month too!!!


Re: April
Posted by: J.H.SUMMERS (---.chartertn.net)
Date: April 11, 2004 09:50AM

M.P.,

Nice to hear from you again. Enjoyed the poem,I like April also, and I liked the way you compared it to the other months.

john


Re: April
Posted by: JP (---.or4.marketscore.com)
Date: April 11, 2004 11:19AM

Nice to have you back M.P. You have great imagination and style.

JP


Re: April
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: April 11, 2004 11:55AM

I enjoyed this M.P. I especially liked the colorful second stanza.

Les


Re: April
Posted by: M.P. (---.resnet.stonybrook.edu)
Date: April 11, 2004 08:39PM

Thanks everyone. Sometimes April seems to have already started in March, but not this year though, =( It snowed in March this year, if I remember correctly.


Re: April
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: April 11, 2004 08:45PM

=( It snowed in March this year, if I remember correctly.

Depends on where you are. It hasn't snowed here in about 15 years.


Les




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