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Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: K.Q. (---.nets.com.jo)
Date: March 25, 2004 09:24AM

Inspired

If science played an instrument,
The strings of our thoughts
Would be its harp.
They are, only when we
See science harmoniously
Dancing with vibrations of life!

If physics could exact a meter
To perfection,
What passion could be found within?
An organized chaos
Of compassionate clusters,
Gives labor to utopias.

If chemistry were a translation
Of rhythms of the heart,
Blood would emit hormones
Of passion to subside all hate.
Imbalanced atoms would strive
To regain equilibrium vibrantly.

If math were the sequenced
Structured heartbeat of life,
Numbers would meet infinity
With a hugely figured embrace.
One plus one would absolutely
Equal the entire human race.

If biology were the skeletal
Bone of our imagery, the art
Of anatomy would precisely
Deliver dissections of unified
Pictures; once puzzles, they
Still behold original mystery.

Does science need permission
From many sturdy minds,
To perform such atrocities
In the name of humanity?
Nature plays to our tune;
It’s we who need to listen!


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: Pam Adams (---.bus.csupomona.edu)
Date: March 25, 2004 01:47PM

Nice!

pam


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: Laicky (---.range217-42.btcentralplus.com)
Date: March 25, 2004 02:14PM


Gosh!

... that's good!

Leicky smiling smiley


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: March 27, 2004 07:27AM

Thanks a lot, Pam and Leicky!


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: Percival (---.humboldt1.com)
Date: March 28, 2004 05:25AM

=]


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: 8s_are_nice_ (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: April 02, 2004 07:43PM

gets the message across and has a consistent form that really works.. its well done K.Q.


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: K.Q. (---.nets.com.jo)
Date: April 03, 2004 04:16AM

smiling smiley to you too Percival.

Thank you for the judgement, 8sarenice_ . I appreciate it, although it sounds like my work is well done, as in well cooked!!!
just joking;thanks!


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: April 05, 2004 07:21PM

I liked this K. Q. especially these lines about anatomy:

Pictures; once puzzles, they
Still behold original mystery.


Les


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: K.Q. (---.nets.com.jo)
Date: April 10, 2004 07:38AM

Thanks , Les. I appreciate your reading through!


Re: Inspired earlier by a thread on the forum!
Posted by: lgreen (---.client.comcast.net)
Date: April 10, 2004 12:26PM

Dancing with vibrations of life---

that line caught my eye and led me to the end---well done......Ell

Ell




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