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Another facial expression!
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: January 19, 2004 03:44AM

Reincarnation

Too real to be true, in this life:
You, a tree deeply rooted to no escape,
Myself, a sun held back by strings of my Maker.

You reach out your branches
In an attempt to embrace;
I engulf you with warmth,
Try, but canít grasp your leaves.

We live for and by us.
Never will we touch!
It is natureís destiny:
To be, yet not be!

We will meet in another life:
You, a seed awaiting to sprout,
Myself, earth caressing with all my grains.

You grow inside me
As I conceive you in my womb;
I nourish you with passion
As you hold me together.

We live for and by us.
Always will we embrace!
It is natureís destiny:
To be and thrive and be!


Re: Another facial expression!
Posted by: Debutant (---.range217-43.btcentralplus.com)
Date: January 19, 2004 06:13AM

I like it, but I thought the title re-birth sounds better than reincarnation.

Debutant


Re: Another facial expression!
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: January 19, 2004 06:50AM

but it is not merely re-birth! Thanks for the suggestion. I, myself, don't like it much now that I read it as not the writer!




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