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Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: November 29, 2003 03:24AM


T'is but a thread that holds us
A splinter far from insanity!
Desperation is a question
That we try to defy with faith;
To believe in the spirit of rain,
To warm its cold with sun rays,
Yet keep the dry moisture within!

Yesterlove, I watched the sunset
Of tremendous emotions,
Wither from heat to vapor.
Yesterpassion, I witnessed
The eruption of lava
From an embittered heart
That is ours, to smother and soothe.

Yestermorrow is ours despite
The will of all winds, my earth!
And when I land, we land,
Nothing will bear the explosion!

Re: Explosion!
Posted by: omantic_53 (159.87.239.---)
Date: December 01, 2003 12:48AM

I liked passages of this one..especially this one

Tis but a thread that holds us
a splinter far from insanity!

I have felt that way many many times....have we all!!

Re: Explosion!
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: December 01, 2003 04:16AM

Thanks for the comment; I guess we all have!

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