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In response to wicked's "confession"
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: November 08, 2003 03:23AM

Falling into “Me”
Realizations emerge.
I crash into the five corners
Of the room of my being.
A conscience that pricks,
Thorns bleeding “Me” green;
Arrogance too pretty,
Crystal white submerges;
Fear of what is to be,
A rose crushed, except for thorns;
Aspirations of a tomorrow,
A deathday to be celebrated;
Imagination constructing a whole piece,
A being that does not hold.
Collecting the shattered remnants,
“Me” too crashes and falls:
Too high and stubborn are my walls!


Re: In response to wicked's "confession"
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: November 08, 2003 11:45AM

Interesting response, I enjoyed it very much.

Les


Re: In response to wicked's "confession"
Posted by: K.Q. (212.118.14.---)
Date: November 15, 2003 02:59AM

Thanks Les; i was hoping wicked would read it and respond!


Re: In response to wicked's "confession"
Posted by: Nolon (208.63.104.---)
Date: November 15, 2003 03:16AM

Nice piece. Thanks for sharing.


Re: In response to wicked's "confession"
Posted by: bethany (---.nas10.nashville1.tn.us.da.qwest.net)
Date: November 15, 2003 05:39AM



I did indeed read it... excellent piece, K.Q. As for comment
I could only explain or defend a moment's thought, and
see no reason for either. Thanx for reading tho!



wicked




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