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Conception!
Posted by: K.Q. (---.nets.com.jo)
Date: October 26, 2003 05:45AM

Conception!
Once conceived ,
A world is created;
You no longer own
What is to come.

Once realized,
Matter is in motion;
You no longer have
The solitude of death.

Once inhaling,
A whole existence exhales;
You no longer lack
The harmony of life.

Once beyond gravity,
Beauty is created;
You now brilliantly emit
The organized chaos
Of an idea once thought!


Re: Conception!
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: October 26, 2003 09:12PM

Excellent construction here. I liked this poem very much.

Les


Re: Conception!
Posted by: K.Q. (---.nets.com.jo)
Date: October 27, 2003 01:22AM

Thanks Les!


Re: Conception!
Posted by: lg (---.ca.charter.com)
Date: January 03, 2005 02:08PM

A resurfacing of a great conceptual poem.

Les


Re: Conception!
Posted by: Keeper of Light (208.14.26.---)
Date: January 03, 2005 07:58PM

Way awesome! I wonder how I missed this one...a mystery!


"Loving people is like farting in the wind; You don't actually accomplish anything, but you feel better."

~The Great and Powerful Angelia~


Re: Conception!
Posted by: drpeternsz (---.client.comcast.net)
Date: January 03, 2005 10:14PM

inconceivable.


Re: Conception!
Posted by: K.Q. (---.hs.14.118.212.in-addr.arpa)
Date: January 04, 2005 05:33AM

Thanks all! I appreciate it.




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