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Posted by: K.Q. (
Date: October 26, 2003 06:45AM

Once conceived ,
A world is created;
You no longer own
What is to come.

Once realized,
Matter is in motion;
You no longer have
The solitude of death.

Once inhaling,
A whole existence exhales;
You no longer lack
The harmony of life.

Once beyond gravity,
Beauty is created;
You now brilliantly emit
The organized chaos
Of an idea once thought!

Re: Conception!
Posted by: -Les- (
Date: October 26, 2003 10:12PM

Excellent construction here. I liked this poem very much.


Re: Conception!
Posted by: K.Q. (
Date: October 27, 2003 02:22AM

Thanks Les!

Re: Conception!
Posted by: lg (
Date: January 03, 2005 03:08PM

A resurfacing of a great conceptual poem.


Re: Conception!
Posted by: Keeper of Light (208.14.26.---)
Date: January 03, 2005 08:58PM

Way awesome! I wonder how I missed this one...a mystery!

"Loving people is like farting in the wind; You don't actually accomplish anything, but you feel better."

~The Great and Powerful Angelia~

Re: Conception!
Posted by: drpeternsz (
Date: January 03, 2005 11:14PM


Re: Conception!
Posted by: K.Q. (
Date: January 04, 2005 06:33AM

Thanks all! I appreciate it.

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