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It's.. Just a dedication
Posted by: Percival (---.humboldt1.com)
Date: August 30, 2003 04:41AM

As it has before my skin rips
All scars bleeding and no tears slip
I'm just waiting for the dark and rain drips
Hell I even want you to make my control flip
Just a little bit
Your lifeless soul for me to dip
Just a moment after falling your blood to lick
This is just a dedication to what I could of had
When I'm tired, alone, and feeling bad.



Post Edited (08-30-03 03:49)


Re: It's.. Just a dedication
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: August 30, 2003 01:34PM

Interesting rhymes here with the exception of "bit" and "lick".

Les




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