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ache
Posted by: wicked (---.nas10.nashville1.tn.us.da.qwest.net)
Date: July 02, 2003 02:34AM



this ache...
betrayal of one's self
no aspect exempt
as i pick & persuade-
open to each attempt
to crucify & degrade
any minor sense of worth...
putting shame
back into place
thus far-
my sole
mastered game




~wicked~


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Re: ache
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: July 02, 2003 11:14AM

Very intense. Aching is part of living, a sad part though.

Les


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Re: ache
Posted by: desire (211.75.91.---)
Date: July 02, 2003 11:15AM

Sad, yet truthful. Nice read.

des


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Re: ache
Posted by: wicked (---.nas10.nashville1.tn.us.da.qwest.net)
Date: July 04, 2003 08:56PM



Thnx... sad but true.

~wicked~


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