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Hmmm
Posted by: Gwydion (209.53.139.---)
Date: May 27, 2003 05:22PM

a little Dwarf from Chiffonberg told me that it’s all part of the plan

the BIG picture so to speak

however being the skeptic I merely shrugged and walked away

and fell over the river running beside me

luckily Mr. Tree picked me up and I kept on moving, bobbing left to right

ready to take out the next cloud that gets in my way

but ya know, it all comes together in its own time


and believe me when i say those tiny gestures are
appreciated...


It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it. (Aristotle)


Re: Hmmm
Posted by: Zoe (---.in-addr.btopenworld.com)
Date: May 27, 2003 07:46PM

Bump

See other poem for comment.

Zoe


Re: Hmmm
Posted by: The Keeper of Light (---.texoma.net)
Date: May 28, 2003 02:14PM

I am feeling that this poem was interesting. I am not quite sure. It takes me a long time to make up my mind on such matters.


Re: Hmmm
Posted by: Gwydion (209.53.139.---)
Date: May 28, 2003 02:19PM



just mindless ramblings from an old soul!


It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it. (Aristotle)


Re: Hmmm
Posted by: Keeper of Light (---.texoma.net)
Date: May 30, 2003 03:16PM

I have made up my mind. It was quite interesting. An old soul needs to ramble sometimes. That is what I do. Well, I guess you hit the nail on the head.




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