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Misplaced Praise
Posted by: The Rambler (164.113.111.---)
Date: April 24, 2003 11:24AM

Lustrous luminescence hangs high above,
casting down rays of silvery love.

At bay, darkness is kept with its light,
warming the air so frigid at night.

It fights to lead travelers to the path.
And in so doing, incurs night’s wrath.

Yet it continues to fight for good
against the minions of a darkened wood.

All give praise to this marvelous creation
that protects through night’s duration,
but misplaced is their admiration;
the Moon’s unworthy of this elation.

So give it not such celebration,
deserves the Sun true glorification.


Re: Misplaced Praise
Posted by: Les (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: April 25, 2003 05:11PM

I agree.

Les


Re: Misplaced Praise
Posted by: :) (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: April 25, 2003 07:12PM

So beautiful. I love it!~ The relationship between the moon and the sun is one of the most beautiful things in nature, and I believe it is analogus to so many things. This poem is just beautifully put. I love it!!!


Re: Misplaced Praise
Posted by: les712 (68.185.73.---)
Date: January 25, 2013 03:04AM

bump


Re: Misplaced Praise
Posted by: les712 (68.116.84.---)
Date: January 27, 2013 11:38PM

The Rambler was one of those mystery writers who came and went, but left a great deal of good work here.

Les


Re: Misplaced Praise
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.110.---)
Date: February 01, 2013 06:54PM

So very poetic




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