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Cat haiku
Posted by: Stephen Fryer (---.bbd01wfd.dsl.pol.co.uk)
Date: April 19, 2003 12:54PM

I figure if I
stare at this door long enough
you will let me out

Stephen


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Jack (---.southg01.mi.comcast.net)
Date: April 19, 2003 04:54PM

So true.

More for cats.



At last the humans
understand, the planet
revolves around ME



Jack


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: bobo (---.tampabay.rr.com)
Date: April 19, 2003 05:50PM

I hate Haiku-- mostly because I could never get the hang of it, but how about a Tanka?

Whisper in my ear
the desire of your heart
Your whiskers so near
your breath a purr then, I hear,
"Get rid of your other cats."

bobo


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: lgreen (---.client.attbi.com)
Date: April 20, 2003 02:06AM

I love cats!! All of you appear to have a clear understanding--it's in the attitude!



She sits in waiting
for him to go to his bed;
she then claims his chair!

Ell


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: silent siren (---.ber.dial.de.colt.net)
Date: April 21, 2003 04:39AM

I just love footprints
with those four little silk claws
but more, their owner

smiling smiley
siren


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: The Rambler (164.113.111.---)
Date: April 21, 2003 02:15PM

My cat watches me
waiting for the chance to pounce
when I turn my back.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Jay M (---.yorkton.com)
Date: April 21, 2003 03:09PM

The stupid pussy
sits on the hood of my car
leaving pussy prints.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Pam Adams (---)
Date: April 21, 2003 04:22PM

Yes, that food was good,
but only for yesterday.
Something new today.

pam


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Pam Adams (---)
Date: April 21, 2003 04:23PM

Look! I see a bird
flying just beyond my reach.
Why can't I get out?

pam


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Jack (---.southg01.mi.comcast.net)
Date: April 21, 2003 04:48PM

Pam-

I thought that was something OUR cats invented!

'Who ME! Eat day-old food?! Have you lost your MIND?!'

Try this trick. Pick up the bowl. Act like you're throwing the 'old' food away. Then rustle the bag, and pour the 'used' food back into the bowl.
Of course this won't work if the cat is reading this over your shoulder!


Jack


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Pam Adams (---)
Date: April 21, 2003 09:46PM

With my houseful, a given bowl doesn't last long enough to be day old. Mine like to pretend to be brand snobs. (Until of course, another cat comes along and likes it.)

pam


Morning already?
You should get out of bed now,
I want your pillow.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Christy (---.cpe.mvllo.al.charter.com)
Date: April 22, 2003 01:04PM

You left the lid up
You're asleep...my turn to play
The piano keys

Dedicated to Touche


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: KD (---.algx.iadfw.net)
Date: April 23, 2003 08:49PM

Your whiskers on my face,
Your paw upon my cheek,
I must get up
For my sleep time
Is over.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: lgreen (---.client.attbi.com)
Date: April 24, 2003 06:59AM


Rub, Rub, Rub the screen
until I can't stand no more
I have to let you in, now!


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: J.H. SUMMERS (---.chartertn.net)
Date: April 24, 2003 11:00AM

Delicate whiskers
to determine the hole size
through which he can fit


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Lady of the Night (66.231.193.---)
Date: April 24, 2003 11:20AM

I love all of these, lol. Especially Christy's; that was cute. I'd write one of my own, as I looooove my cat, but I can't write within rules of haiku or anything for that matter! What's a tanka?

Lady of the Night


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Jay M (---.yorkton.com)
Date: April 24, 2003 11:42AM

· Tanka
A Japanese poem of five lines, the first and third composed of five syllables and the rest of seven.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Terry Johnson (---.tnt1.alamagordo.nm.da.uu.net)
Date: April 24, 2003 12:11PM

You live here by my
Good graces only, cross me
and be banished human.

Terry


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Lady of the Night (66.231.193.---)
Date: April 24, 2003 12:24PM

Lol, like that one, Terry. Thank you, Jay.

- Me


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Christy (---.cpe.mvllo.al.charter.com)
Date: April 24, 2003 02:40PM

Thanks, Mekana ;-)

Terry - Your's is great - shows you how powerful a few words can be!


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Pam Adams (---)
Date: April 24, 2003 05:23PM

Not quite a haiku, by Rudyard Kipling.


I am the Cat
who walks by himself, and all places
are alike to me.

pam


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: bobo (---.tampabay.rr.com)
Date: April 25, 2003 01:21AM

Does anyone know... was there a rule about the subject (of Haiku) having to be about nature? I wrote one years ago and was told, "That's not a Haiku because it's not about nature." Is this true?

bobo


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Lady of the Night (66.231.194.---)
Date: April 26, 2003 08:50PM

Terry, I just saw that your last one has 18 syllables.

You can sleep in my
bed, but come morning you may
not rise before I.

Lady of the Night


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Lady of the Night (66.231.194.---)
Date: April 26, 2003 09:11PM

This is my cat, Sunnybabes, just waking up from a nap in my dad's chair. He sleeps like that all the time, lol.

Lady of the Night


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Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Lady of the Night (66.231.194.---)
Date: April 26, 2003 09:25PM

Oh wait, just kidding... try this one.

Lady of the Night


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Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: JP (---.tnt1.rochelle.il.da.uu.net)
Date: April 27, 2003 01:03PM

His green eyes, slanted
Against the sunlight, become
Deep black holes at night.

Didn't want to be left out.

JP


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: ozepe, (---.pop.bezeqint.net)
Date: April 27, 2003 09:24PM

sharpening her nails
she doesnt understand
the high cost of furniture

ozepe


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: ozepe, (---.pop.bezeqint.net)
Date: April 27, 2003 09:29PM

slumbering morning dew
my head sinks in the pillow
her pillow is my head


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Anon... and on (---.server.ntl.com)
Date: April 27, 2003 09:45PM

you bore me human
tapping on your keyboard when
i need attention


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Lady of the Night (66.231.194.---)
Date: April 27, 2003 10:42PM

Ozepe, your first one had 18 syllables, and the second had 19.

Lol, Anon.. I liked that grinning smiley How appropriate.

Lady of the Night


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Noloco the poetic Junkie (---.vp.centurytel.net)
Date: April 28, 2003 02:04AM

I enjoyed it nice work all of you,but it was a bit confusing at times lol.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Jack? (---.southg01.mi.comcast.net)
Date: August 10, 2003 07:33PM

Another from the good old days


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Tigermonkey (---.in-addr.btopenworld.com)
Date: August 23, 2003 06:13PM

The Cat's Day

1. Very early morning:
So, you want to sleep?
Don't you want to hear my song
Now, at four a.m.?

2. Early morning:
Woken up at last!
Now my chance to wipe my nose
On your nice warm leg.

3. Rest of the day:
Sleep sleep sleep sleep eat,
Sleep sleep sleep eat sleep sleep sleep,
Sleep sleep sleep sleep, eat.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Jack? (---.try.wideopenwest.com)
Date: January 29, 2004 04:43PM

you can never have too many cat haiku


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: twotenranch (---.tnt1.alamagordo.nm.da.uu.net)
Date: January 29, 2004 06:08PM

Knew a furier once who could describe throwing a cat through a screen door without using his hands.

Terry


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: joseph torelli (---.dyn.optonline.net)
Date: January 29, 2004 09:50PM

You'll never see me
Doing tricks to earn my keep,
Stupid, stupid dog.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: J.H.SUMMERS (---.chartertn.net)
Date: January 29, 2004 11:02PM

HERE KITTY KITTY
HERE KITTY KITTY KITTY
HERE KITTY KITTY

john


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Christy (---.cpe.leeds.al.charter.com)
Date: January 29, 2004 11:52PM

John - I was working on my computer and my email popped up - apparently I'd checked the box for responses to get sent to me from this thread - but when I read this I laughed so hard, I just had to share it with you. It was a nice way to end my evening. They just won't come to you until they are good 'n darn ready, will they? ;-)


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: northcountrywoman (---.client.comcast.net)
Date: January 30, 2004 06:55AM

The quick autumn mouse
is squishy now, and slower.
It's a gift! Praise me!


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Debutant (---.range217-43.btcentralplus.com)
Date: January 30, 2004 07:33AM

Eyes to eyes we meet;
I staring; you, read my mind;
I have to concede.

Debutant



Post Edited (01-30-04 06:35)


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: IanB (---.tnt11.mel1.da.uu.net)
Date: January 30, 2004 09:02AM

Of course I'm aware
Today is your birthday, but
That's not important.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Pam Adams (---.bus.csupomona.edu)
Date: January 30, 2004 12:44PM

Gliding through the air,
Missing my grip and falling.
I meant to do that.

pam


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Gwydion (209.53.139.---)
Date: February 02, 2004 11:43AM



You guys are great, humorous and talented!


It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it. (Aristotle)


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: nas (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: February 07, 2004 10:58PM

Under the wheat sacks
a few mice are feeding
I dream a large cat


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: Pam Adams (---.bus.csupomona.edu)
Date: February 09, 2004 09:50PM

Poems about cats?
Naturally. Who else would
humans write about?

Cecil
Obi-Wan
Ellie
Sammy
Black Cloud
Silvie

(don't tell Pam we're using the computer!)


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: December 21, 2012 09:12PM

Cat enters deli
Drops a dead mouse on the floor
I think I'll skip lunch.


Re: Cat haiku
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: December 26, 2012 08:56PM

warm by the window
purring like a smooth machine
shrewd cat sleeps all day

Les




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