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Together for a moment
Posted by: john poff (---.cpe.mountaincable.net)
Date: January 06, 2003 07:04PM

we can be gods for awhile

fearing nothing but time

we can watch the fall of a friend

only to help him up

watch the sickness take control

watch the pale colour cover faces

watch the gods lose thier power

coming back to being mortle

wake up to be alone

you are the only god left in your universe.


Re: Together for a moment
Posted by: Jason Keel (---.chartertn.net)
Date: January 06, 2003 08:13PM

It starts out fine, but by the end it gets a little muddy. You need to check your spelling before you post. Jason


Re: Together for a moment
Posted by: les712 (68.185.73.---)
Date: January 25, 2013 03:11AM

Good one, John.

Les


Re: Together for a moment
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 25, 2013 01:17PM

thanks for waking up the gods.




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