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"Crépuscule"
Posted by: Gwydion2 (108.180.57.---)
Date: April 29, 2013 03:35PM

Twilight,
the brief interlude of all parts.

So begins the dance between
light and dark.

The romance is always the same -
darkness to prevail...

and light succumbs to
a peaceful and colourful time of day.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 04/29/2013 03:37PM by Gwydion2.


Re: "Crépuscule"
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: April 30, 2013 10:03AM

Nice imagery, Gwydion. I imagine that a poem describing the dawn (perhaps in similar terms) may be coming from you, soon(?) I can always hope.

Joe


Re: "Crépuscule"
Posted by: les712 (68.116.84.---)
Date: April 30, 2013 10:41AM

Nicely done, Gwyd.

Les


Re: "Crépuscule"
Posted by: Gwydion2 (75.157.137.---)
Date: April 30, 2013 09:27PM

Thank you, Les

Hi Joe, if the inspiration strikes, then a dawn poem there shall be grinning smiley


Re: "Crépuscule"
Posted by: citymedia (86.29.173.---)
Date: May 06, 2013 12:02PM

Nice poem, love the imagery

Ian B
(fka cityprod)


Re: "Crépuscule"
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: May 13, 2013 02:04PM

this is beautiful.




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