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"A Blade"
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.111.---)
Date: April 29, 2013 02:04AM

One
stands alone,
cold but brave.

Surrounded
by death, it stands
tall until no more.


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Re: "A Blade"
Posted by: les712 (68.116.84.---)
Date: April 29, 2013 12:28PM

I envision a medieval battle scene here, Gwydion. A good little poem.

Les


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Re: "A Blade"
Posted by: Gwydion2 (108.180.57.---)
Date: April 29, 2013 03:31PM

wow, so glad I could evoke that imagery; I was writing about a blade of grass just before the first winter storm.


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Re: "A Blade"
Posted by: les712 (68.116.84.---)
Date: April 29, 2013 04:55PM

lol, pretty close, huh? Good one on me, Gwyd.

Les


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Re: "A Blade"
Posted by: Gwydion2 (108.180.59.---)
Date: April 29, 2013 05:09PM

I like that you saw your own picture...it's all a matter of perception


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