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Curo
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.185.226.---)
Date: April 27, 2013 02:37PM

From the rank castrating delta, there's an aspect that's miraculous
An accident accustomed to the flakes upon the checkerboard
A sequence incoherent, it sustains the glance of vividness
The voyeur, he is neutralized and falls upon his sword


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Re: Curo
Posted by: Boo Cipher (38.108.87.---)
Date: April 27, 2013 06:09PM

Sounds like a mirror. winking smiley


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Re: Curo
Posted by: les712 (68.116.80.---)
Date: April 27, 2013 11:31PM

he is neutralized and falls upon his sword

That's gotta hurt.


Les


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