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"Especially at Night"
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.111.---)
Date: April 27, 2013 12:03AM

Pink chiffon sweats then crinkles,
falls limp, finally wrapping around bulky thighs
and flaring out at knobby knees -
scarred with dreams of children young
for those days of easy breathing,
especially at night.

Tattle-tales swirl in the aqua-like sky
making pictures of our nightmares;
god's little angels hum because
dead voices cling to the wings of wind
to wrap cruelly around stars,
making them drop like stones.

Tone-deaf trees lean to catch then release
a child's dream catcher
until we enter the age of wonderment;
it is the root of our posture, making romance
easy until the wind comes to collect
and sweep us away, especially at night.


Re: "Especially at Night"
Posted by: les712 (68.116.93.---)
Date: April 27, 2013 01:14PM

Gwydion, this one has a gentler touch than most of your work. I like it.

Les


Re: "Especially at Night"
Posted by: Gwydion2 (108.180.59.---)
Date: April 27, 2013 02:50PM

Thank you, Les!


Re: "Especially at Night"
Posted by: Boo Cipher (38.108.87.---)
Date: April 27, 2013 06:07PM

She is just growing up, Les. lol :p




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