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Midnight Clouds
Posted by: Gwydion2 (207.6.35.---)
Date: April 22, 2013 07:30PM

a movement -
spied.

I see her

fighting
against

the darkening sky.

a blur -
gone.


Re: Midnight Clouds
Posted by: les712 (68.116.93.---)
Date: April 24, 2013 12:31PM

This one says a lot in very few words. Good one, Gwyd.

A moment of flight
into impending gloom;

an ominous sight
from across the room.


Les


Re: Midnight Clouds
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: April 24, 2013 04:26PM

I like the elegance of your piece, Gwydion

amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: Midnight Clouds
Posted by: Gwydion2 (207.6.35.---)
Date: April 25, 2013 05:16PM

Thank you, Les; I like your contribution

Thank you, Peter




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