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A Day at the Office
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.109.---)
Date: April 18, 2013 12:25AM

She sits
like a big black ugly vulture
smirking, claws extended to destroy her enemy;
hunched over the death with hunger,
salivating...

She separates meat from the carcass,
blood and guts splattering her,
surrounding her,
enveloping her mind so that all she sees is red -
so much red.

Finally,
she sits back mouth filthy with muck,
gruesome grin
around teeth gnashing,
methodically chewing through
gristle.

Selecting a tossed bone
she pick at her teeth,
removing morsels of her ex-employee
swallowing,
gleefully aware she is satiated
and yet...

‘May I have another?’


Re: A Day at the Office
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: April 18, 2013 01:11AM

great image...excellent finish. Thanks. Glad to see you here.

amo et avanti,

Peter

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 04/18/2013 04:03PM by petersz.


Re: A Day at the Office
Posted by: les712 (68.185.68.---)
Date: April 18, 2013 10:23AM

A vivid picture you paint here, Gwyd.

Les


Re: A Day at the Office
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.110.---)
Date: April 18, 2013 04:55PM

Thank you gentlemen...I lost my job a month ago after 15 years and this piece seems fitting.




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