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auto issues
Posted by: frost42_24 (24.22.159.---)
Date: April 13, 2013 01:25AM

sometimes I feel
like I'm two quarts low
with too many miles to go
before I can level off

the cost
that price of distances
you travel without knowing
exactly where you're headed

no amount of tuning up
is going to smooth it out
progression is a process
and you must do the time

two quarts low
means I'm three quarts
from being empty
so I'd say, I'm holding my own

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 04/13/2013 01:25AM by frost42_24.


Re: auto issues
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: April 13, 2013 07:55AM

Nice analogy...enjoyed the read.

Joe


Re: auto issues
Posted by: frost42_24 (24.22.159.---)
Date: April 13, 2013 01:14PM

thanks, Joe. I appreciate the feedback. I almost deleted it after posting smiling smiley


Re: auto issues
Posted by: les712 (66.189.172.---)
Date: April 13, 2013 02:00PM

A good read Sherry, sometimes we just need a tune up.

Les


Re: auto issues
Posted by: Boo Cipher (184.151.231.---)
Date: April 13, 2013 04:00PM

Sometimes Les? *laughs.

I am well aware of auto issues, both with cars and myself. Too many times I don‘t fuel myself up and get knock and ping. Got some small issues with my truck and some big ones with my car. My car is being taken off of the road for a few months so I can get all of those resolved.


Re: auto issues
Posted by: frost42_24 (24.22.159.---)
Date: April 13, 2013 07:08PM

thanks, Les.

Boo, my Jeep's water pump went out on our family vacation in S. Dakota of all places. Had we waited on the repair, we'd have been stuck there 5 days ! um, no thanks. Rented a car and will pick mine up on the way back through next weekend.

Good times smiling smiley


Re: auto issues
Posted by: Merc (174.126.181.---)
Date: April 20, 2013 02:11PM

Great Scott South Dakota!!! That's where mountains look like people and people look like mountains.
Comprehend the pome though. Liked it. I find myself using more oil these days. Usually at least one quart low.

Good to see ya back Frosty.


Re: auto issues
Posted by: Boo Cipher (70.77.64.---)
Date: April 22, 2013 12:00AM

North Dakota used to be the Red River Colony and was the original Province of Manitoba.

My truck, Sybil, is having random electrical issues. Hope to track them down soon.


Re: auto issues
Posted by: Merc (174.126.181.---)
Date: April 22, 2013 06:47PM

54/40 OR FIGHT!!!!


Re: auto issues
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: May 13, 2013 02:09PM

haha




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