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Some of Us
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: April 02, 2013 05:28PM

Some of Us


As children of the 40s
we'd forgotten
to avert our eyes
Later, we'd say
'I've seen everything.'
But we hadn't,
some of us---
Some of us
had not gone off
to war,
had not gone down
South
to march for integration
and pea soup,
Some of us
had stayed on the 3rd floor
of buildings
that were rotten
like our skins,
stayed in the comfort
of our minds
gone off to college,
barely shed
our slums
and racisms
and petty gender
tricks,
Some of us,
gathered puddles
of self-assurance,
took the train West,
cultivated an accent
so farm boys
could learn
to add beans
and rainfall
to their wealth.



Re: Some of Us
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: April 02, 2013 07:47PM

Nicely done, Peter.


Les


Re: Some of Us
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: April 02, 2013 08:53PM

Thanks, Les. Some lessons are hard learned, hardly learn.

amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: Some of Us
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: April 03, 2013 10:30AM

We are mostly products of our environment, Peter. I've learned not to be too hard on myself for a past filled with self-centered ignorance of what was really happening to the world around me. We can't go back, so I think it best to act now in such a way that we won't have to write future poems regretting our behavior today.

Forward!

Joe


Re: Some of Us
Posted by: Boo Cipher (184.151.231.---)
Date: April 03, 2013 01:41PM

Brilliant!


Re: Some of Us
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: April 03, 2013 01:50PM

Thanks, Bruce.

Joe,

I don't do much regretting. Although I am almost totally with what you say here. I mainly let my past feed into my work now without trying to make myself look good [too much].
As I usually say,

amo et avanti,

Peter




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