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“Sea to Sky”
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.108.---)
Date: March 08, 2013 11:41PM

You’ve been away a long time,
far from home; let me remind you:

The moon blows;
weeping wind-scapes
leave mountains capped white
and lost lagoons
ripple with water’s edged mirror

A winding road migrating left;
sea to the high of heaven’s sky.
Angels learn to fly there
on wings white with fleece
dipping into golden halo’s.

The palest of blues
mar the skies kite strings
weaving to and fro with a
colourful string of opal pearls;
midnight’s opaque opposite.

Crimped waves crash;
sandy bleach-blonde land
twinkle with the sparkle of granite
reaching to an outcropping of gnarled
trees rooted into stone…

you live here,
in this wonderous province; welcome home.


Re: “Sea to Sky”
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: March 09, 2013 12:49PM

Beautifully descriptive, well done Gwyd.


Les


Re: “Sea to Sky”
Posted by: Boo Cipher (184.151.118.---)
Date: March 15, 2013 03:17AM

I have missed this place.

Loved the poem, Gwydion.

B


Re: “Sea to Sky”
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: March 15, 2013 03:18PM

You do paint vivid pictures with your words, and this is no exception. Well done.

Joe


Re: “Sea to Sky”
Posted by: rainysunshine (92.253.12.---)
Date: March 17, 2013 05:21PM

Looks "wonderous". Good to read your work again.


Re: “Sea to Sky”
Posted by: Boo Cipher (184.151.231.---)
Date: March 22, 2013 02:36AM

If you‘re talking about the highway Gwydion, I prefer its old moniker... The Sqeamish Highway.

This is one of your finest pieces.

I can‘t believe you snuck back here without telling me you were coming! Lol


Re: “Sea to Sky”
Posted by: Merc (174.126.181.---)
Date: March 22, 2013 06:15PM

bienvienedos


Re: “Sea to Sky”
Posted by: redmitten (69.144.98.---)
Date: March 25, 2013 02:46PM

lovely to consider. i esp like this: 'sea to the high of heaven’s sky.'


Re: “Sea to Sky”
Posted by: Gwydion2 (75.157.136.---)
Date: March 28, 2013 03:01PM

smiling smiley thank you for all the reads and comments. Yes, Boo, this is about the sea to sky highway...I hear yah about the old path, but beauty is beauty and it takes my breathe every time.




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