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“Sounds of Silence”
Posted by: Gwydion2 (75.157.136.---)
Date: March 07, 2013 08:54AM

Making love to myself
alone again
in a room with only four walls
but my mind is beyond dimensions.

I snake out a hand
rubbing memories,
feverishly reinventing
to soothe the fractured breast.

A beautiful stranger
seeps into my tears,
crystallizes on my cheeks
and cracks into a million diamonds.

But nothing is worth
the pain of an empty heart
when a hand can replace passion
and sting like a slap across the face.

Your china face sits on my bureau,
softly weeping,
beside the glue that never works,
covered in dust clothes.

When I come too
I am no further ahead and I
fall once again to the bed, trying
trying, to rub out that spot…

the spot that remembers you.


Re: “Sounds of Silence”
Posted by: rainysunshine (92.253.12.---)
Date: March 17, 2013 05:56PM

This is beautiful Gwyn.


Re: “Sounds of Silence”
Posted by: Lady of the Evening (50.142.161.---)
Date: March 17, 2013 06:11PM

Love it. You captured so much and dressed it beautifully.


Re: “Sounds of Silence”
Posted by: Gwydion2 (75.157.136.---)
Date: March 28, 2013 02:53PM

Thank you Rainy and Lady!


Re: “Sounds of Silence”
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: March 28, 2013 05:53PM

A good read Gwydion.

Les




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