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A meeting of minds
Posted by: larkinabout (81.132.33.---)
Date: March 04, 2013 11:47PM

You said you preferred Orwell’s essays.
The way they lulled you into a sense
of the plain, transcending any given ideology
often whilst condemning or praising it.

I said - I preferred his moustache.

You said your first memory was of screaming:
Yowling, uttering your brutal stages of advance
dazed from the drop, finding your voice, or not;
Images flocking like birds of Assisi…

I said - The Rockford Files

You said what moved you was a child’s pale face.
A garden at night after a party, a wine glass
blood-red with cigarette debris, and a guy
no-one knows stroking a dog.

I said – I was that guy.


Re: A meeting of minds
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: March 05, 2013 06:49AM

I don't recall seeing pictures of Orwell sporting a "moustache," although I imagine he might have had one from time to time. And his essays hardly transcended "any given ideology," seeing how he was such a huge proponent of democratic socialism. That notwithstanding, I think the closing stanza is very well written.

Joe


Re: A meeting of minds
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: March 05, 2013 10:14AM

Nicely done, Larkin.

Les


Re: A meeting of minds
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: March 06, 2013 07:42PM

I love this one. Great last line...good stuff.


Re: A meeting of minds
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: March 07, 2013 02:17AM

I olways enjoy theway you change directions in a piece.


Re: A meeting of minds
Posted by: Lady of the Evening (50.142.161.---)
Date: March 17, 2013 04:24PM

Your style reminds me of an old friend. I loved his work, and I enjoyed this as well.

I appreciate the ebb and flow, the way it's shaped and tapered down to the end, the detailed imagery and the references to cultural icons.

Thanks for sharing,
Lady


Re: A meeting of minds
Posted by: Boo Cipher (184.151.231.---)
Date: April 03, 2013 01:42PM

Very good Kris. Much enjoyed.




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