User Submitted Poetry
 Interested in feedback about a piece you've written? 

eMule -> The Poetry Archive -> Forums -> User Submitted Poetry

Goto Thread: Previous•Next
Goto: Forum List•Message List•New Topic•Search•Log In
frustration
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 12:52PM

the air is damp
around me
falls the clouds
that shade
my judgement
ambiguous-
the sides
still drawing...
the line
is f&*%ing tired
of being
in the middle


Options: Reply To This Message•Quote This Message
Re: frustration
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: February 28, 2013 01:49AM

Sounds like war.

Les


Options: Reply To This Message•Quote This Message
Re: frustration
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: February 28, 2013 11:24AM

Les, it is a war...a war between the sides and the "gray matter" that always resides near the middle in life-and how the line between them grows weary of being caught between the two.


Options: Reply To This Message•Quote This Message


Goto: Forum List•Message List•Search•Log In
Sorry, only registered users may post in this forum.
This poetry forum at emule.com powered by Phorum.