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I must drive you crazy
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 12:14PM

I find you too quiet

T alking is not your forte
A nd you don't try to hide it
L ately, I try to dig it out of you
K illing your silence with questions

T aking things
O ut of you
O ne piece at a time

M aking you work
U p enough
C onverstation to keep me
H appy...


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Re: I must drive you crazy
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 06:06PM

Good one, Frosty.


Les


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Re: I must drive you crazy
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 11:17PM

I like the double perception and the self-critique.

Good job.


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Re: I must drive you crazy
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: February 27, 2013 11:18AM

thanks, Guys


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Re: I must drive you crazy
Posted by: larkinabout (81.132.33.---)
Date: March 04, 2013 11:58PM

Acrosticly nice.


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Re: I must drive you crazy
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: April 02, 2013 11:26PM

Thanks


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