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Re-vision
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 01:52AM

Re-vision
for Jack K.

Do you know what you are getting into?
Watch out!

Looking up and down
the mountain.

Us ants get tired.

Even out here by the Pacific
ocean.

Same back at the Mississippi
ocean.

We lost our compass, Vishnu,
Kavi Usan danced with demons.

No one is betrayed.

The Aral Sea disappeared
north of Nepal
a long, long way.

I will cut my hair
in silence...
for silence.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 02/26/2013 11:40AM by petersz.


Re: Re-vision
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 10:39AM

Us ant get tired.???


Les


Re: Re-vision
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 11:42AM

Les, That should be

Us ants get tired.

I made the change in my typescript but forgot to get it canged here on the Mule. Thanks for pointing that our for me.

amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: Re-vision
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 06:08PM

Thanks for the clarification.

Les




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