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“Oxymoron”
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.110.---)
Date: February 24, 2013 11:21PM

She is
awkwardly
graceful.
...
He is
diligently
apathetic.

Together they are
rock-solid
sinuous liquescence…

and I wish I had their eyes
in the palm of my hands
so that I could see their
love for what it really is.


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Re: “Oxymoron”
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: February 25, 2013 02:41PM

Gwydion:

This brought a much-needed smile on a not-so-smiley day. Thanks.

Joe


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Re: “Oxymoron”
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: February 25, 2013 10:57PM

I enjoyed this one, especially the 3rd stanza.

Les


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Re: “Oxymoron”
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: February 26, 2013 02:05AM

The last stanza
reminds me
of the seer
in the tv show
I just saw:

not a pretty sight.


Still, a most excellent poem.

amo et avanti,

Peter


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Re: “Oxymoron”
Posted by: Gwydion2 (75.157.137.---)
Date: March 01, 2013 07:32PM

I'm so glad you guys enjoyed this piece...thanks for reading!


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