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"Her Day Out'
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.110.---)
Date: February 10, 2013 02:11PM

With her hawkish eyes and
the mouth of a trumpet
she regrettably was unable to attend the event,
for she didn't have it in her to be quiet -
'twas unnatural for her.

Thus she stormed out of the room
down the long hall and out the front door
into a bright beam of sun
that exploded across her face.

She sat upon the top stair with a hurrumph,
though the twinkle in her eyes betrayed her pleasure,
and casually removed her cardigan and then her shoes.

Flexed and pointed her toes,
a poor imitation of ballet for beginners,
and hummed a useless tune to the ants
marching across her stair, content
to be sharing a good time with bad company.


Re: "Her Day Out'
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: February 10, 2013 09:47PM

quite a portrait


Re: "Her Day Out'
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: February 11, 2013 10:42AM

Bet it felt good, though.


Re: "Her Day Out'
Posted by: les712 (68.185.66.---)
Date: February 11, 2013 12:22PM

Very descriptive.

Les


Re: "Her Day Out'
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.110.---)
Date: February 13, 2013 08:07PM

Thank you, Gentlemen!




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