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A Reply I Wrote
Posted by: PearlRa1n (50.75.171.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 08:09PM

Maybe you seem depressed,
maybe you've been compressed.

But you don't have to take a bullet to the head,
you don't have to wind up cold and dead.

You have a life worth living,
even if you feel it's not worth giving.

Don't give up hope don't make that choice,
don't end your life don't silence your voice.

You don't know but you've got more to say,
even if you're not going to today.

You could tomorrow,
you could with sorrow.

You could keep on going
You could keep on growing.

/--PearlRa1n--\


Re: A Reply I Wrote
Posted by: les712 (68.189.77.---)
Date: February 04, 2013 04:25PM

This poem and the other "You're not alone" would make very good song lyrics.


Les




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