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Potential
Posted by: PearlRa1n (50.75.171.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 03:48PM

I know you've got a lot of pain,
but you've got so much more to gain.

It's not your fate to be just another,
abused by your father and raised by your mother.

You've got so much potential,
you could be so influential.

You see the world in black and grey,
but tomorrow's always another day.

It's another way, a secondary May,
it's not Spring but that doesn't mean that you can't have life,
don't let yourself be dragged down with strife.

You can't change your past but yes you can.
Start now and have a past you want to remember,
make it through just one more snowy December.

/--PearlRa1n--\


Re: Potential
Posted by: les712 (68.189.77.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 04:36PM

I like the sentiment here, Pearl.


Les


Re: Potential
Posted by: PearlRa1n (50.75.171.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 04:52PM

Thank you, there is definitely a lot of sentimentiality behinf this one. I feel like I can better express my thoughts and feelings through a few lines of prose

/--PearlRa1n--\




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