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You Can Fly
Posted by: PearlRa1n (50.75.171.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 02:29PM

Even if you're sad, even when you're mad.
There's no reason your life can't be better than the bad.

You've got to take some actions,
divide your problems into fractions.

Throw them off one by one,
another by the rising sun.

You can see the moon if you simply open your eyes,
there is no reason to say goodbyes.

I'm not letting go I'm holding on to you,
and if it kills me I'm going to see it through.

Because I don't want to lose this fight,
won't let the dark consume the light.

Have you thought about what you could be, instead of looking to the past and seeing what already happened,
everything there already was to see.

Would it matter if I brought some life to your empty chest,
I'm just trying to help and I'm trying my best.

I don't want to see you gone,
I want to see you start upon.
Another path a new beginning,
help you see the joy you could be bringing.

So I tell you get up and try,
yet still you say you want to die.
No's not an answer I'll accept,
if you got up I know you'd fly.


Re: You Can Fly
Posted by: les712 (68.189.77.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 02:46PM

Welcome aboard Pearl.


Les


Re: You Can Fly
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.110.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 03:10PM

Hi Pearl, This is a very well written poem...there is a lot of emotion in this and I love the encouraging last line, beautiful.


Re: You Can Fly
Posted by: PearlRa1n (50.75.171.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 03:11PM

Thank you, I tend to pour a lot of emotion into my poetry, and I hope to be posting some more soon
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