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Driftwood
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 22, 2013 02:39AM

Driftwood

We got to get rid of some of it, to clean the beach.
We got to look at some of it... natural works of art.
You have got to hold tight to it to train the dog.
We got to know: we are all drift wood,
So we won't mistake ourselves
for some kind of masterpiece.
Driftwood just happens...just like us.
Live with it.


Re: Driftwood
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: January 22, 2013 11:50AM

I never envisioned myself a piece of driftwood before, Peter, but I like the analogy. Very accurate, I think.

Joe


Re: Driftwood
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 22, 2013 03:24PM

Thanx, Joe


Re: Driftwood
Posted by: les712 (68.185.73.---)
Date: January 22, 2013 03:40PM

The only difference between us and the driftwood is that we can actually steer our course. I too like the analogy Pete.

Les




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