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Alone
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 18, 2013 05:12PM

Alone

Sitting beneath
A single moon
--a thousand leaves
Pass away.

A thousand tastes
A single tongue
Distraction and revelation
Together.

Listening
To the artist
Who loves her own work
While my vision
Is of the everyday
Everyday.

The poet lies in wait
Of the poem.


Re: Alone
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: January 18, 2013 08:54PM

And you usually find it, Peter.


Re: Alone
Posted by: les712 (68.185.73.---)
Date: January 21, 2013 10:17PM

Great closing lines Peter. In my experience the poem arises from my constant searching for a word, or in other cases searching for an end to the story that began as an idea.

Les


Re: Alone
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 21, 2013 11:55PM

this started with all those years reading translations of Japanese poetry,
went on to a conversation with an artist,
including an idealistic self-characterization,
and ended with an observation of the process


Re: Alone
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: January 25, 2013 09:34PM

The last line clenched it.




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