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little poem
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 18, 2013 05:00PM

the flatness
of certain areas
of her face
makes her so striking
even from the most oblique
angle
...I would buy a drink
from her
anytime.


Re: little poem
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: January 18, 2013 08:54PM

...or perhaps buy a drink FOR her?


Re: little poem
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 19, 2013 02:06PM

Strangely, that was precisely the angle I was not taking on the scene.


Re: little poem
Posted by: les712 (68.185.73.---)
Date: January 21, 2013 10:23PM

This does evoke images of certain women I have known Pete. Surprisingly, I never have thought once about what impression I might have made on them...Perhaps I should have.

Les


Re: little poem
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 21, 2013 11:58PM

maybe, maybe not. our lives seem to follow their own lead sometimes.




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