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The Uncovered Aspect
Posted by: hollygolightly (173.185.64.---)
Date: January 11, 2013 03:15PM

Ebony fingers flexing against sky
wholeheartedly exposing
hidden selves,
indulging artistic truths
as they leave off
green responsibility.
Finally bare,
exultant,
they pose
flexible
in wild abandon,
glory revealed
in art and line.
Bowing in dance,
arching in ecstasy,
twisted in aged wisdom.
Fourth season ballet
always graceful,
never bleak.


Re: The Uncovered Aspect
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: January 11, 2013 06:43PM

I like the flow of this, sort of like a graceful dancer, the words reflect the action. Nicely done.

Les


Re: The Uncovered Aspect
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 13, 2013 12:05AM

thanx, holly. nice piece.

Peter


Re: The Uncovered Aspect
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: January 14, 2013 09:54PM

"green responsibility" I like it...the sound of it...the poetry of it evokes several images at once. Nice poem, Holly.

Joe




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