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the light of day
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: December 06, 2012 10:11PM

the light of day

I thought I was listening
to Charles Olson's voice
But it was another man's memory
So I lost the thread the moment
became unraveled
and I sang to myself
in the morning
waiting for some other voice
other bodies to inhabit my room
before its beginning
the beginning of day
and the need for punctuation
before taking a breath
before another lesson unlearned


Re: the light of day
Posted by: les712 (68.116.84.---)
Date: December 14, 2012 06:53PM

This one flows nicely.


Les


Re: the light of day
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: December 16, 2012 01:14AM

thanks


Re: the light of day
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: December 21, 2012 08:56PM

"before...the beginning of day and the need for punctuation" Another well-turned phrase that says so much in so few words.

Merry Christmas, Peter and a Happy and Healthy New Year.

Joe


Re: the light of day
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: December 24, 2012 08:49PM

health, happiness and free lemonade for all!




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