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envy: the moonshine
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: October 23, 2012 07:19PM

there's something to be said
for the way the night
holds the moon

tender as it is
shortlived before
the interruption
of dawn

I spy-
some jealous
lover of the darkness
watching moon beam

and envying its shine


Re: envy: the moonshine
Posted by: petersz (71.198.224.---)
Date: October 23, 2012 09:54PM

primo


Re: envy: the moonshine
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: October 24, 2012 04:44PM

I like the thoughtfulness of this piece. Nicely done.

Les


Re: envy: the moonshine
Posted by: frost42_24 (174.231.149.---)
Date: November 03, 2012 09:33PM

Thank you both




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