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Necessity
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: October 23, 2012 06:50PM

I ate it because I was starving

and choked with every swallow

that mechanized humanity



A little bit better; more

of the creation poised to retrieve

the pieces of ourselves

we've nearly forgotten



Processing- power

for the billions of requests

Subtle pleas for acceptance



And technology; carnivore

of the very creativity who made it

Gorging on the insecurities



But I only eat it because

I have to, to survive


Re: Necessity
Posted by: petersz (71.198.224.---)
Date: October 23, 2012 09:53PM

Frosty,

survival counts, even after everything else becomes just everything else. nice piece,

amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: Necessity
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: October 24, 2012 04:46PM

Interesting poem, Frosty, sometimes survival is the issue.


Les




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