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means beyond the end
Posted by: mr yuck (---.tnt2.fredericksburg.va.da.uu.net)
Date: October 25, 2002 04:05PM

a sight unseen
slightly green
all too lean
never without means


dirty in the shadows
no one saying anything
everyone saying nothing
many think it a game

anything can change
nothing may make cents
pennies may break silences
something in the fine print

never without names
faces look the same
means beyond the end
digging for a friend


Re: means beyond the end
Posted by: Noloco (---.vp.centurytel.net)
Date: October 25, 2002 04:23PM

Wow Powerful. I did not get the meaning,but i must say i did find this to be very strong with word's. Some might say different,but i enjoyed it. It also seemed as if someone was raped and you get the picture,but i know that is not it. Hmm i gonna come back here and see what other's say later.

"To write something, you have to risk making a fool of yourself." Anne Rice


Re: means beyond the end
Posted by: mr yuck (---.tnt2.fredericksburg.va.da.uu.net)
Date: October 25, 2002 04:54PM

thank you nolo




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