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sweet October
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: October 09, 2012 05:42PM

The wind will do its best to whip me.
It will stir up great commotion
and colorfully respond
to my mood in this season.

My longing…
The same longing of a billion before.
The only differences-
perspective
and positioning.

Awake!
No more the calming.
Ever restless,
I am carried away
by the breeze.

Remembering this feeling
at each stage of my progression.
A child raking then tumbling in the piles-
An adolescent watching with some agony as the leaves die with dignity-
A melancholy adult amazed by how quickly it flies-

Yes, I admit that I might get caught up in its moment
but I refused to be defeated by this wind of change.


Re: sweet October
Posted by: petersz (71.198.224.---)
Date: October 10, 2012 01:40AM

always glad to see your take on things.


Re: sweet October
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: October 10, 2012 02:12PM

One of my regrets, a small one, is that we do not experience the changing of the seasons like most of the country does. I like this poem Frosty, good job.

Les


Re: sweet October
Posted by: frost42_24 (174.231.131.---)
Date: October 15, 2012 08:56PM

Thanks guys. Almost took this down




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