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Weeds
Posted by: Jack (12.46.184.---)
Date: October 12, 2002 09:00PM

A vacant lot
A country lane
The footpath by the river

Slow down
Look close
There is plenty of time

First color
Daffodil gold
Shrugging off her ermine coat of snow

In the ditch
Facing south
The purple loosestrife too impatient for April

Queen Annes' lace
Rules the meadow
In the same exquisite gown her mother wore

No hothouse
No nursery
No frail supermodel orchid or even rose

No fertilizer
No insecticide
Their Gardener is nowhere to be seen

High summer
Song-birds and cicadas
The mower comes along to clear the mess

No sorrow
No tears
We'll all be back in the spring

Unnoticed
Unwanted
Who are they to call us weeds?


Re: Weeds
Posted by: Jack (12.46.184.---)
Date: October 12, 2002 10:10PM

oops, sorry for the double-post.


Re: Weeds
Posted by: J.H. SUMMERS (152.163.188.---)
Date: October 13, 2002 12:42AM

Jack, Nice poem,especially liked the stanza about Queen Annes' lace. jhs


Re: Weeds
Posted by: JP (207.43.74.---)
Date: October 13, 2002 02:48AM

I enjoyed the walk, I could hear the birds, smell the flowers, and feel the warmth of the first days of Spring. Nice Jack. I'll be dreaming of purple loosestrife again. JP


Re: Weeds
Posted by: Brucefur (24.67.253.---)
Date: October 13, 2002 06:52AM

Good poem Jack,

My roommate and friend David and I have a running arguement over just such a topic.

I love Morning Glories, but to him they will always be a weed. When he mows he goes right over them where ever he can, and when I mow, I go carefully around them.

I find them pretty and elegant, and David finds them simply a pest.

In our own ways we are both right. Weeds are a matter of perspective.
A neighbour once said to me; "A weed is anything that YOU don't want."

Brucefur


Re: Weeds
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: March 20, 2013 11:49PM

Good one, Jack.

Les


Re: Weeds
Posted by: Merc (174.126.181.---)
Date: March 21, 2013 07:02PM

I gotta tell him the mule is pulling again.


Re: Weeds
Posted by: Boo Cipher (184.151.231.---)
Date: March 22, 2013 02:29AM

He should know already Terry, he was part of the facebook thread I started that got KQ, QueenB and Nutmeg back here.

I DO need to post something for John Summers and Thorn though.


Re: Weeds
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: March 22, 2013 01:27PM

What about that Limey gal, anybody heard from her?

Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 03/22/2013 01:34PM by les712.


Re: Weeds
Posted by: Merc (174.126.181.---)
Date: March 22, 2013 01:46PM

I was in touch with her for quite a while, but she has fallen off the radar.




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