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back in five minutes
Posted by: Ted (65.82.79.---)
Date: October 02, 2002 01:18PM

when my bones break
you pick them up
you stow them away
keeping them as evidence
to use against me later
you document the fractures
and remember every split rib
and hair line fracture
a deciding factor
you write neat yellow labels to tell you
exactly where they came from
and exactly when to expect
results of the tests you had ordered
you are a doctor of my private pain
you have had one patient throughout your entire existance
a joke in the medical world
a black market laugh
to be remembered as
a solid that evolved into a liquid


Re: back in five minutes
Posted by: Snark (136.152.197.---)
Date: October 02, 2002 11:23PM

macabre and soul felt


Re: back in five minutes
Posted by: Michaela (65.82.79.---)
Date: October 07, 2002 12:11PM

i've read through all of the entries; this was the only one i hadn't heard before. is it new or old?


Re: back in five minutes
Posted by: Noloco (64.91.31.---)
Date: October 07, 2002 12:20PM

it is from the second of this month

"To write something, you have to risk making a fool of yourself." Anne Rice


Re: back in five minutes
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: March 07, 2013 04:09PM

This is crazy, but nicely done.


Les


Re: back in five minutes
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.108.---)
Date: March 08, 2013 11:44PM

This is crazy awesome!




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